When I look outside my bedroom window I see my neighbour's two polo vivo and a polo classi which are cars.  I also see a park which is 10m away from my house.  It has a swing, a meri-go-round, and a slide.  My backyard has a vegetable and fruit garden which my mother owns.  My house is a 6 roomed house which has a kitchen, two bedrooms, a bathroom, a lounge and a dining room.  My neighbour's have a bluegum tree that I like to look at in the summer.  That is what I see outside my 
Lauren
10/17/2013 02:31:20 am

I like how you described the view from your window. You could describe what kind of fruits and vegetables your mother has in her garden

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Isaac
10/17/2013 02:32:05 am

I liked how you described your home. I would like to know more about your garden.

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Messiah
10/17/2013 02:44:52 am

I like how you described your house and view from your bedroom window. When I read what you had written I could picture what you described, which is nice. I would love to know what the bluegum tree looks like because we do not have them in the upper peninsula.

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