What I see outside my bedroom window.. I see crowd of people making a little noise with their feet.  They just sound like they are marching but they are rushing at work.  i see a lot of cars; mostly sports cars and bikes, also a peaceful house quiet and green grass on the field.  It is a house of God, a holy house.  That is what I see outside my bedroom window.  
Rachel
10/17/2013 02:38:23 am

You have great imagery and you are very disruptive when you are describing the people walking. What dose the house of god look like?

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jon
10/17/2013 02:40:03 am

Your description on the house of god was really nice. When you said "bik", did you mean motorbike or bicycle?

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Wyatt
10/18/2013 02:00:38 am

I like the way you talked about the "marching", but was wondering more about the church.

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